Every chapter can't be whizz bang wow. I liked it.
You have great characters that make all of your chapters enjoyable reads. Thanks, and keep it up!
Mate, I enjoyed it, it was a good concolidation of the story and still progresweed things. I was a little worried you were going to have Kirsten's dads ideas changed by her being attacked by the guys that attacked our protagonist and him defending her. (maybe you still will!) :)
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