tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post7076342688467508377..comments2023-04-29T11:31:49.077-04:00Comments on Xenophon Hendrix: Chapter 22 Is UpXenophon Hendrixhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-70275699692230200942008-05-11T14:21:00.000-04:002008-05-11T14:21:00.000-04:00I agree with Razer. The italics are an excellent w...I agree with Razer. The italics are an excellent way of showing a different type of dialogue. They are intuitively understood, and make the reading easier.<BR/><BR/>Great job!<BR/>BertBerthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01131775486981242391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-69156741620848807752008-05-11T12:23:00.000-04:002008-05-11T12:23:00.000-04:00Italics in a landslide. I'll keep using them.Italics in a landslide. I'll keep using them.Xenophon Hendrixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-43225624788718508242008-05-11T10:47:00.000-04:002008-05-11T10:47:00.000-04:00Italics are a good idea for differentiating betwee...Italics are a good idea for differentiating between different types of dialog. I use italics and a some form of brackets, personally. I'm really enjoying the story so keep up the good work.<BR/>RazerAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11719698291168907150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-54751169210677284272008-05-11T09:52:00.000-04:002008-05-11T09:52:00.000-04:00Italics are good.Italics are good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-30451382609012754392008-05-11T09:03:00.000-04:002008-05-11T09:03:00.000-04:00like the italics its a good way to seperate the sp...like the italics its a good way to seperate the spoken word to the internalAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-76870204162520738612008-05-11T08:09:00.000-04:002008-05-11T08:09:00.000-04:00I agree with all the rest of the comments - italic...I agree with all the rest of the comments - italics are good - they make it clearer (though your writing style is very clear anyway), and it follows the convention that other stories use.<BR/>I like your style with fight scenes, dialog, and slow development of the romance side of things, with the keen interest by the girls in his life. The interaction with his mom is great also.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-38132800390921572922008-05-11T07:17:00.000-04:002008-05-11T07:17:00.000-04:00I like the italics better. :)I like the italics better. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-82644378109419713142008-05-11T06:46:00.000-04:002008-05-11T06:46:00.000-04:00Another Yes for the italics. Many other stories at...Another Yes for the italics. Many other stories at SOL that have mind-to-mind use this convention to help make the distinction between thougt and speech and I think it is helpfulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-74680860892236880832008-05-11T05:31:00.000-04:002008-05-11T05:31:00.000-04:00And yet another vote for the italics.And yet another vote for the italics.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-41429844282202397122008-05-11T05:28:00.000-04:002008-05-11T05:28:00.000-04:00Italics do look better, though I must say that wit...Italics do look better, though I must say that with your writing it's still easy to follow the story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-26389359778388070602008-05-11T04:34:00.000-04:002008-05-11T04:34:00.000-04:00The italics are good, a nice differentiator.The italics are good, a nice differentiator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-83121640480374884252008-05-11T04:05:00.000-04:002008-05-11T04:05:00.000-04:00Add another vote for italics :)Add another vote for italics :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-24034296191505172072008-05-11T03:03:00.000-04:002008-05-11T03:03:00.000-04:00I like the italics, much easier to follow along wi...I like the italics, much easier to follow along without figuring out internal/externalAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4097446896118905380.post-32706451486554456172008-05-11T01:55:00.000-04:002008-05-11T01:55:00.000-04:00I like the italics just fine. They simplify recog...I like the italics just fine. They simplify recognition of internal conversations.<BR/><BR/>Goos job with chapter 22!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com